No one can beat a mass-
Of students in my
class
You can find
everyone distinct;
And now some are
extinct;
So why go disquiet
Maybe it is for
our right
When we act as
book-readers,
Teachers are
lip-readers.
We have a hell of
codes
And talk standing
near the doors.
We impart loads of
matters
No one in my class
is hatters.
It was hard for me
to recoup
Which was pulling
me like a rope;
We are not nasty
by nature,
And yet teachers
are ready to put signature.
All times we were
lippy-
And also we
shouted “yippee!”
Teachers- The best
set ever got
And we miss them a
lot.
I used to think
about the past
And never has it
stood last
When I missed my
gang
It was really a
big pang,
Nothing is
impossible
When to my eyes my
friends are visible!
WOW!You have got great flair for language.My intense salution for that.The theme of patching with rhyming sequence sounds felicitous.MY favorite lines are thus:"When we act as book-readers,
ReplyDeleteTeachers are lip-readers." and "When I missed my gang
It was really a big pang,
Nothing is impossible
When, to my eyes my friends are visible!"
Great job Dhiku!
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